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Ch-57: Tit for tat ( Online Novel - Zero )

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It was a dark at night. Dan opened his front door slightly to peep outside. It was dark all around. Slowly he slipped out, again looked around to make sure that no one is watching him. As he was sure he came out of his compound. On road he looked around, the road was empty. He walked some distance and turned right. He was walking fast in the dark. As his walking speed increased, his thought wheel also speeded up.

Last time he was awarded by killer with quite a big sum...

This time also as he informed the killer about the finding of John, Sam and Boss about the next victim, killer was very happy with him..

The killer had called him on a place to collect his award. Now, in fact Dan had come to this place to collect the award. Killer had promised him that he would get an award he had never thought of. As he thought of an award his heart started pounding with happiness. He stated dreaming the money ten times more than the earlier one, his speed slowed down. Now he was walking as if intoxicated.

Over.. this is the last one...

Now onwards I would not indulge in such deceits...

In fact, after I get such a handsome amount, it’s not required for me to get involved in such acts again...

After I get money... I will not leave job immediately.. Otherwise somebody may get suspicion..

It is better to be in the job as a time pass... and leave it when the proper time comes, and go for some business..

Otherwise first go for some business and as I settle in it, leave the job...

Dan’s thought wheel was moving continuously. As he realized the place had come, where the money had been kept, he stopped, again looked around, and neared the place. Now a smile was crept over his face. The place was too deserted to get feared. But Dan’s fear was overtaken by his greed. There was a huge tree ahead.

This is the one ... below which the money must have been kept..

Now, Dan was feeling elated.

Now just few seconds..

I would be an owner of a big sum within few seconds, which I never dreamt of,...

He went to the trunk of the tree, searched for the emblem. He found a big boulder kept there. Without wasting time he moved the boulder. As he moved the boulder, there was a big explosion and his hand was exploded into pieces. The pointed pieces of the boulder were inserted into his body. He fell down to death in a pool of blood. Just before his last breath, he realized that, yes, it was his last deceit as he decided...

Continued …

Original Novel by Sunil Doiphode
English Version by Mugdha Apte 

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Ch 9A- First Mistake (Novel-Zero)

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Command1 and Command2 were relaxing, were content with the smooth execution of the job delegated to them by the boss. The whole last night was quite an animated one. Command1 was so tired that he was dozing but he could visualize last night’s every activity.....

... It was 3-3.15 in the morning, a cold and chilling morning. Command1 and Command2 looked around and cautiously entered the apartment, really calm and quiet, perfect for their job. Though they had already taken care of the security, they were taking every step vigilantly. As they reached the elevator, Command1 gently pressed elevator button, both entered without waiting to open the door completely. Both were wearing white socks, and kept their overcoat collar straight, hiding their face. One of them pressed the button indicating floor no. 10.

Elevator stopped and opened as it arrived at 10th floor. Command1 vigilantly peered around through the ajar elevator door. Finding everything calm and quiet, as they expected, they came out. Though now they were walking fast, it was not making sound; definitely their shoes’ sole would have been specially made of smooth rubber. They stopped at flat no. 103. Taking final look around, Command1 removed something from his overcoat pocket and inserted into a keyhole. Just few rotations and few jerks to the door handle, the door opened. A triumphant smile crept over their faces. Both entered the flat; inside it was dreadfully dark. They removed their white socks and kept back in their overcoat pocket. They had put on rubber hand gloves inside. They closed the door without making noise.


They were struggling in the hall as it was very dark. In the dark they took a guess for the bedroom and started in that direction. Suddenly Command1 tumbled into  a tea table kept there, almost falling down. He caught hold of something to avoid his fall, Command2 also held him. He was saved from a fall, but in an attempt he shuffled with a round glass paper weight kept on a table, which started rolling down. Command1 swiftly caught hold of it and kept it back to its prior location.

" Hey lit the lighter... it’s bloody too dark" he grunted keeping his tone low.

Command1 lit the lighter, removing from his right overcoat pocket. Now it was visible, though the light was dim. They saw an open door right in front of them.
It must be the bedroom. Command1 thought something and started, slowly and vigilantly, pacing to it. Command2 followed him. As he entered the bedroom, he saw a figure slept on the bed. Command1 signaled Command2 with his index finger to keep quite.
Command1 groped for the bulb switch; put it on as he found it. Whoever was lying on the bed must be in deep sleep, for he did not show any movement. There was no way to find who was it, since the face was covered with a cashmere blanket. Command1 removed his  revolver with silencer from his right overcoat pocket, aimed at the figure, and removed the blanket from its face. It was a beautiful lady, probably the one they wanted, because without a bit delay he fired at her continuously, even not counting the bullets. She stirred, but as a last struggle against the death. Her struggle ended, into a sure death. They even did not allow her to wake up. The body turned into a corpse, as a shattered flesh and flowing blood.

" Hey give me the knife" Command1 said, the softness in his tone was vanished turning into a hard commanding tone.

Command2 obeyed him, handing over the knife. Command1 started writing on the wall ahead, dipping the knife in corpse blood.

Contd..

Original Novel by Sunil Doiphode
English Version by Mugdha Apte

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Ch-5: Heart beats again..(Novel-Zero)

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While going to B23, John was surprised of himself.

Why I felt so worried about her?...

He never felt so worried about some woman in his life, though he had handled so many cases. B23, he arrived at, and knocked the door. He pushed the door and entered in, as it was open. Anjeni was lying on the bed, looking in void outside the window.
Anjeni came out of her thoughts when she heard the footsteps. Finding it was John; she smiled, still with traces of grief on her face. It was clear that she still was not able to come out of the shock, she had undergone. He stood in front of her. She gestured him to sit, pointing at the stool kept aside. He pulled the stool and sat close to her bed.

" How are you?" He said, keeping the bouquet beside her.

She grinned faintly.

"Those who undergo the difficult times, only can feel the pain... I can understand the state of mind you are going through... " John was consoling.

Tears came out; she tried to stop, but failed. John stopped talking. He kept his consoling hand on her shoulder. But it resulted into more outbursts. She was sobbing uncontrollably holding him tight. John was trying to soothe her, exactly not knowing how to do it.

After a while she seemed to be normal. John thought, it would be a better time to ask her about the murder.

"What do you think? Who must be behind this?... I mean any guess?" John asked cautiously. .

She shook her head  and again started to look outside the window. She seemed to be lost somewhere. John removed a photograph from his pocket.

" Look... here on this wall ... something round is drawn with blood... What it could be?... Any idea... rather who would have drawn this?'' John asked.

Anjeni looked at the photograph. Looking at her dead husband in the photograph, melancholy crept over her face again. John kept back the photograph.

" I mean ... can you relate that circular shape with something? ... It can be 'O' in the alphabets or even it can be zero..." John said.

" I can understand that this is not the right time to ask the questions about the murder... but the sooner we get the information, faster we can catch the criminal. ... " John continued.

Anjeni now sat right trying to control her emotions and firmly said, " Ya, you can proceed... "

John also sat right, knowing the gravity of the situation and time.

" What was Sani doing?... I mean by profession" John fired the first query.

" He was into import-export business... mainly of garments... his business was spread all over the Indian continent." Anjeni was telling.

" Any professional rival?"

" I don't think... his domain of work was totally different ... so he was not having any professional rivals" Anjeni said.

" Ok... What do you do?" John asked.

" I am a fashion designer" Anjeni answered.

The session continued for an hour or so. Lastly getting up, John said, ''Ok then... I think it’s sufficient for now... You must be tired.. ... I mean mentally... You should take rest... If anything comes up later, I may trouble you again"

" It doesn’t matter" Anjeni answered.

John turned to go. As Anjeni got up probably to usher him, John said, " You keep resting... You badly need it "

Still she followed him to the door. When John was about to turn out of the door, he heard her say, "Thank you!"

He abruptly stopped, turned and asked "For what?"

" To save me... doctor told me everything... had you not breathed me, I wouldn’t have been alive now " Anjeni said with tears and gratitude filled in her eyes.

" What’s so special about it .. I have done my duty" John shrugged his shoulder and said.

" Its your kindness" Anjeni said, reaching the door.

John turned again to go, this time walked off fast, might be to control his irrepressible emotions. Within seconds he reached the end of the alley, stopped before turning right and found she was still looking at him with intense tenderness.

John was walking through the passage towards the lift. He was feeling heavy to leave Anjeni. Suddenly something odd near lift caught his attention. A man wearing similar black T-shirt, with zero sketched on it, was approaching the lift from the other side. But the man seemed not to be the same as he saw before. John dashed towards him as he was still far.
John called out " Hey... Hello"

But before he could hear John, he entered the open lift. John was on his toes, trying to reach the lift before closing. Lift closed, but still there was a chance, for it was stationary at its place. . At last John could make it, pressed the lift button hard, but in vain, as lift started to slide down. John struggled for his instinct, and darted down the steps. There must be some relation between the 'zero' and the murder, his gut feeling said. John ran as fast as he could, keeping eye in between on the position of the lift. But the lift never waited in between, may be it was destined to stop only on the ground floor. Lift went ahead two floors, as he realized, he ran down more swiftly to win the race between machine and human. Could he win?

Exhausted John reached the ground floor, looked at lift to find who won? Red display above the lift door showed an arrow pointing upwards. He was lost, as lift was emptied at ground floor long back. He rushed out of the building, scanned everywhere around to find everyone but the one who he wanted. He returned to the parking. The man in black T-shirt was not there. He rushed to the road beside the hospital, but he could not find the man, he wanted very badly.

Original Novel by Sunil Doiphode
English Version by Mugdha Apte

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Ch-2:The sky falls (Novel-Zero)

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When Anjeni turned her car in the parking lot, she saw the police Van parked there, which she had seen before, during shopping. Her heart beat increased; what would have happened? Was there something wrong in the apartment? She quickly got down, approached the lift carrying her shopping bags. As she reached the lift, it opened and two policemen came out. She became more nervous, looking at their hurried and strange movements. She entered the lift and pressed the button on which number 10 was written.

As Anjeni came out of the lift on 10th floor, she found people gathered around her open flat door. She felt her limbs going numb. Shopping bags fell  down from her hand. She rushed through the crowd.

“What happened?’’ She enquired.

Nobody answered; they started staring at her empathetically. She entered the flat, finding the police crowded around the bedroom. She headed towards  the bedroom.

“What happened?’’ she asked one of the policemen.

Avoiding her gaze, he looked towards the bedroom with gloomy face. When she entered the bedroom, she was shocked looking at the scene inside. Her husband’s badly injured body was lying on the bed, in pool of blood. She found as if the whole bedroom was revolving around her, she fainted and fell down.

Last aggrieved word that came out of her mouth was -‘’ Sani...’’

John immediately came forward to support her, seeing her falling down. He tried to get her back to normal, but he found her unconscious.  Probably her breath was also lost.

John ordered Alex, standing next to him  “Call the doctor immediately ... I think she is under a shock ”

Alex promptly went to the phone kept in the corner and started dialing a number.
John was not able to figure out what to do next.  It was required to do something before doctor comes.

 “Sir... I think she needs artificial breathing ...” somebody suggested.

John started to pump air into her mouth through his mouth. In between, he used to press her chest counting 101,102,103 to regain her breath. He repeated the cycle twice or thrice . He was worried to find that she was not showing any signs of regaining her breath. To give a last try he pumped air again in her mouth and pressed her chest counting 101,102,103…..

Anjeni was admitted in the hospital in intensive care unit. Outside the ICU, John and one of his associates were waiting eagerly for ICU door to open.  The ICU door opened and a doctor came out. John went to him attentively.

“ She is out of danger.. nothing to worry” doctor said removing the green mask from his face .

John felt relieved. Before he could ask anything, his mobile rang. John checked its  display and attended, “Yes Sam”

“ Sir we searched him everywhere but we could not find him” Sam answered  from other side.

“ Could not find... How long it took when we started to search him after we saw him?... he would have been nearby somewhere...” John said.

“ No sir, ... probably he changed his clothes immediately... because we had intimated about him in every police station nearby...”

“ Ok... now start for his sketch... we must get him...” John instructed.

“ Yes sir” Before John could hear the reply, he disconnected his mobile and said “ Ok doctor... we take your leave... take care of her... and in case you face any problem, inform us immediately...’’

“ Ok” doctor said.

John turned to leave .

He abruptly stopped and instructed his associate, “ find out her relatives if any...and inform them.

“Yes sir” the associate said.

(...  contd...)

Original Novel by Sunil Doiphode
English Version by Mugdha Apte

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Ch-1:Happy Go Unlucky (Novel-Zero)

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The Himalayan valley, alluring and charming……. there were tall trees, as if they are trying to reach clouds in the sky. Ahead, far away, the slope of the valley was shining, as if it was covered with pallid snow. And somewhere, midst those shining slopes, a rivulet was originated. It  was flowing swiftly, taking enthralling snake turns around the valley, and making melodious, pleasant sound.

Tall trees, chirping birds, , melodious sound of the flowing river, it was difficult to judge, at least from the atmosphere,  which era was going on. Since thousands, rather millions of years, this natural phenomenon must be going on and on. Had there been absolute deterrence from humans and their so called ‘progress’, there would have been no difference in old untouched era and this new era as such. . At the bottom of one of these tall Himalayan hills, an ancient cave was nestled. The cave was surrounded by tall grass, waving with the chilling  breeze. In the cave, a rishi was engrossed in meditation. Long hair plaits on the head, long beard, long mustache, all hairy, as if tired of growing. Out of long meditation, an aura, a deep seriousness, was developed on and around his face. Ignorant from the atmosphere around, in fact ignorant from the era, the place and his body, his soul would have been traveling through the ages. While traveling through eternal, infinite ages, at last, his minuscule soul had entered the modern age ....

An evening in America. A footpath of one of the crowded roads of a crowded city. People were walking, and their modernity was reflecting through the way they were walking on the footpath. Vehicles were rushing on the road. People were so occupied with  themselves, that they were not even looking at the other companions walking beside them. Everything was systematic, as if preplanned, like self-driven  machines or robots. They were looking straight ahead along the line of their noses, as if it is against their manners to look around. In this herd of people, a beautiful, slim lady Angeni was walking along, holding a jam packed shopping bag in her  hand. She must be around 25 and had an everlasting sweet smile on her face. . She meticulously took  care of the hair locks coming on her face with the other  hand. Although she must have almost completed her shopping which was evident from her  shopping bag, she turned to enter a shop. Suddenly a police vehicle rushed on the road making annoying  high pitch siren sound. The mob walking on the footpath got disturbed. Anjeni stopped abruptly  on the entrance of the shop, turned and started looking around to check what had happened? All people started to look around in inquisition , few of them stopped while few turned and kept walking.  . It seemed like their mechanical  faces were having this very emotion of fear since long.  Some people were still successful in hiding their expressions, as  if   reacting did not fit  in their “manners”. Police van vanished in the speed with which it came. Road was disturbed for a while like a stone creates ripples in water.  Again everything came back to  normal, like a machine, as if nothing had happened. Anjeni turned and entered the shop. How could she know that the van, that just passed by, had some connection with her life?

Police van stopped by an apartment in a rich lavish colony. Some residents of the colony, who were relaxing in their balconies, started looking at the police van in confusion. There was an unnatural silence in the colony. John and his team got down and rushed to the apartment lift. The driver parked his vehicle in the parking lot. As John and his team reached the lift, they were disappointed by not finding the lift in place.
“Shit...” John said in annoyance, pressed the lift button and waited for the lift to come down.
John was impatiently pressing the lift button again and again. After some time the lift came down. John pressed the button again; door opened. A person wearing black T-shirt came out. Some white letters were scribbled on the T-shirt, which caught John’s attention. It was ‘Zero’ written in white letters. John and his team entered the lift at once. John pressed the button having number 10 written on it. Lift closed and started running upwards.
Lift stopped at the 10th floor. As all of them including John rushed out, they saw an open flat in front of them, they darted towards it. When they reached the open door, they slowly, cautiously entered in, covering each other. Finding nobody in the hall, John and his two associates turned towards the bed room. Rest of the team started searching in the kitchen, study room and other rooms. Kitchen and study room were  empty. While entering the bedroom John realized that most of the things in the bedroom were lying around clumsily, probably thrown by somebody. He signaled two of his associates and they started heading towards  the bedroom carefully, covering each other. As they entered the bedroom, they witnessed a terrible scene, worse than they expected. A badly injured man was lying on the bed with a pool of blood around him. His body was still , might be unconscious or even dead . John went to him and checked his pulse. He was already dead, probably  quite some time back.
'' Here ... here it goes'' John's associate said, calling others. Other team members immediately joined them. John looked around inspecting to find any evidences.  Suddenly a wall adjacent to the bed caught  his attention. There were blood spots spread around on the wall. As he looked at it carefully, there was something written on the wall with blood…….. a circle was drawn.
“What does it mean?”John’s thought-process accelerated.
“Whose blood is this? – corpse’s, killer’s or someone else’s.”
Whether the circle was drawn by the killer or the victim himself, just before he was dead.
'' You people carry on'' John instructed to his team to carry on their usual investigation procedure.
His associates started the jobs assigned to them. John again observed carefully looking around the bedroom. There was a study table in the corner, with a photograph of the  victim on top of it . There were  various post envelopes scattered around on the table. John picked up one randomly.
It read, “To Sani Carter” .
Victim's name must be Sani Carter, as those were the letters arrived to him through post. John picked up the bunch. Going through those envelopes, he casually walked to the window and looked outside. Wow.... there was a beautiful lake outside, surrounded by  pleasant  greenery. For a while John forgot the atmosphere around and got engrossed  in the stunning scene outside. While looking at the lake, something suddenly connected him back again to the activities  in the room. What was it? It was the shape of the lake; it was nearly a circular lake.
John started thinking again,  “ What is it, that  is drawn on the wall?'
Suddenly a thought struck  him-
' Does it mean Zero?... yes it must be a zero'
He spoke aloud ''Sam and you... Dan''
''Yes sir'' Sam and Dam came forward.
''While getting into the lift, we saw a guy wearing a black T-shirt ... and there was 'Zero' drawn on it... are you aware of?'' John asked them.
''Yes sir... I remember his face'' Sam said.
''Yes sir... I also remember" Dan also backed up.
''Good... quickly go down .... and get him... come on …… go ... quick... still he must be around...''
'' Yes sir''
Sam and Dan darted out to get him.

...contd..

Original Novel by Sunil Doiphode
English Version by Mugdha Apte


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